Many thanks for the guide, I got two ideas on it.
One is very important I think, the other one may be nice:
One of the first steps should be a section how to change the default password. When you test Hyperic you can control agents which are possibly running as root-user. On the other hand the default password is just one click from the login-field an not just in depth of the documentation
The glossary is a good idea and very important: a defintion of the term "Control Action" would be nice